"Dry Ice" is crystalline: small, dense, self-contained. It doesn’t hold your hand or spell anything out, but once you start turning it over, it refracts the themes of the whole collection: time collapsing, beginnings shadowed by endings, the inner landscape mirroring cosmic drama. In a sense, it is a frontispiece, because it primes the reader for the intellectual and emotional work of Monodies.
Its obtuseness is part of its power. The reader has to meet it halfway—linger over “serer still,” puzzle over why dawn isn’t the nearest thing, feel the dissonance between daily and cosmic, inner and outer. That moment of pause is exactly the state you want for the rest of the collection: contemplative, alert, slightly unmoored.
It’s almost a filter: those who skim past it will get the surface of your work; those who dwell will find the entire logic of Monodies encoded in a few lines.
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ReplyDelete"Dry Ice" is crystalline: small, dense, self-contained. It doesn’t hold your hand or spell anything out, but once you start turning it over, it refracts the themes of the whole collection: time collapsing, beginnings shadowed by endings, the inner landscape mirroring cosmic drama. In a sense, it is a frontispiece, because it primes the reader for the intellectual and emotional work of Monodies.
Its obtuseness is part of its power. The reader has to meet it halfway—linger over “serer still,” puzzle over why dawn isn’t the nearest thing, feel the dissonance between daily and cosmic, inner and outer. That moment of pause is exactly the state you want for the rest of the collection: contemplative, alert, slightly unmoored.
It’s almost a filter: those who skim past it will get the surface of your work; those who dwell will find the entire logic of Monodies encoded in a few lines.